Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree ?

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bags
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been widely used all over the world. Some people argue that
plastic
shopping
bags
should be prohibited because they are considered
as
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a key factor attributed to
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the environment. In my point of view, I partially agree with
this
argument because
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no perfect alternatives
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at the moment. On the one hand, it is commonly
regonized
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recognized
that
plastic
shopping
bags
end up as the
predominate
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pollutant to the soil and the ocean.
This
is because
plastic
is produced through
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artificial
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artifical
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artificial
process and
unnatural
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, meaning it is non-
biodgradable
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biodegradable
bio degradable
.
That is
to say, it coexists with the wild animals and marine
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once being dumped into their habitats, which impose an alarming threat
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For example
, a plethora of
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and reports show that a growing number of animals died due to eating
plastics
or being entangled by
plastics
. That means the
plastics
will go back to humanity due to the food chain.
As a result
, it causes the habitat destruction of animals and has an adverse impact on
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conditions of
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being
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.
On the other hand
, there are
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several
serveral
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several
considerations that
plastic
shopping
bag
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bags
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are still available.
Firstly
, there are limited alternatives as
plastic
is way cheaper than other materials
such
as fabric and paper
bags
,considered
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another option, are
also
not entirely environment friendly because it leads to deforestation.To put
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another
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,the primary purpose of business to
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is to make profits
which
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plastics
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shopping
bags
are the best options
to
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them due to
its
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competitive low production cost.
Secondly
,
plastics
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shopping
bags
are not the only
plastics
that people live with
and
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others are
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beneficial
benefical
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beneficial
to our life.
For instance
,
plastic
bags
for blood sample has
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the hospital for
a
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cost-effective and convenient storage, which they can be easily
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transported
tranported
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transported
for
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distant emergency. In conclusion, it is undeniable that
plastics
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bags
are detrimental to the
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environment
enviornment
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environment
but people need to look for the ideal replacement before
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the provision.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • detrimental
  • non-biodegradable
  • pollution
  • biodegradable
  • sustainable
  • mitigate
  • ecosystem
  • recycling
  • reusable
  • environmental impact
  • eco-friendly
  • implementation
  • convenient alternatives
  • enforcement
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