Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree ?

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bags
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has
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been widely used all over the world. Some people argue that
plastic
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shopping
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should be prohibited because they are considered
as
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a key factor attributed to
exacerbate
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the environment. In my point of view, I partially agree with
this
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argument because
there's
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no perfect alternatives
emerged
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at the moment. On the one hand, it is commonly
regonized
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recognized

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that
plastic
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shopping
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end up as the
predominate
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predominant

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pollutant to the soil and the ocean.
This
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is because
plastic
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is produced through
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artificial
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an artifical
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artificial

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artifical
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artificial
process and
unnatural
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is unnatural

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, meaning it is non-
biodgradable
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biodegradable
bio degradable

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.
That is
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to say, it coexists with the wild animals and marine
organism
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organisms

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once being dumped into their habitats, which impose an alarming threat
to
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For example
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, a plethora of
researches
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research

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and reports show that a growing number of animals died due to eating
plastics
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or being entangled by
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. That means the
plastics
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will go back to humanity due to the food chain.
As a result
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, it causes the habitat destruction of animals and has an adverse impact on
health
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the health

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conditions of
human
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a human
the human

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being
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beings

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.
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, there are
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several
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several

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several
considerations that
plastic
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shopping
bag
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bags

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are still available.
Firstly
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, there are limited alternatives as
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is way cheaper than other materials
such
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as fabric and paper
bags
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,considered
as
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another option, are
also
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not entirely environment friendly because it leads to deforestation.To put
in
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it

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another
word
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words

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,the primary purpose of business to
public
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the public

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is to make profits
which
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plastics
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Plastic

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shopping
bags
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are the best options
to
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for

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them due to
its
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competitive low production cost.
Secondly
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,
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plastics
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plastic

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shopping
bags
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are not the only
plastics
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that people live with
and
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others are
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beneficial
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benefical
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beneficial
to our life.
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,
plastic
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bags
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for blood sample has
allow
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the hospital for
a
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cost-effective and convenient storage, which they can be easily
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transported
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tranported
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transported
for
an
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distant emergency. In conclusion, it is undeniable that
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plastics
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plastic

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bags
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are detrimental to the
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environment
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environment

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enviornment
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environment
but people need to look for the ideal replacement before
inhibit
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inhibiting

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the provision.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • detrimental
  • non-biodegradable
  • pollution
  • biodegradable
  • sustainable
  • mitigate
  • ecosystem
  • recycling
  • reusable
  • environmental impact
  • eco-friendly
  • implementation
  • convenient alternatives
  • enforcement
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