Many people argu that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Other think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your Opinion.

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Nowadays, it is a controversial topic that most people think that making comments or criticizing

teachers

students

can improve the quality of education while others believe that there will be a disappearance of respect in the classroom. I agree with the formal view.

This

essay will discuss both views in the forthcoming paragraphs.

Firstly

, many people think there should be criticism of

teachers

who are not good at teaching. When

students

point out them they will improve their skills.

For instance

,if a teacher does not know a particular topic in detail and explains them in the wrong way

then

pupils should have the right to point out them.

On the other hand

, I believe that there should not be an intervention of while teaching. It creates a disturbance in the classroom and

teachers

can

also

lose their confidence.

For instance

, some

students

are naughty in the class and they do not like to study so they will disturb their

teachers

and interfere unnecessarily with topics. To illustrate, In China, a survey was conducted in 2010 in two schools, data was taken by the government one school does not have interference by the scholars in teaching and others have interference by the

students

while teaching. A school without interference got maximum and good grades as compared to those that have the freedom for

students

to interfere. And

also

, found that those

students

have a lack of respect for

teachers

. To conclude, in my opinion, I firmly think that there should not any involvement of

students

when

teachers

are teaching.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

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7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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