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You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can start

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing with regards to my
date
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 of joining as a Product administrator in your organisation
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 Week. Due to legal exit formalities in my present
company
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, I could not able to join as per the agreed
date
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.
Last
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 month, I was interviewed by the General administrator in your
company
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 for the post of Product Manager in the Manufacturing Department. The Interviewer was impressed with my technical and communication skills.
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, I was informed about my Management Skills are extremely Out-Standing and the
Date
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 of joining by
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 week on 21/03/2022. Recently, my present
company
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 revised some of their employee relieving policies. As per current policy, the Employer should serve a minimum of 14 days up to a maximum of 28 days depending on manager approval. Based on the new policy, I need to work a maximum of 4 Weeks in the present
Company
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. I completed the Initial 2 weeks of my notice period with a pending for the remaining 2 weeks. If possible, I am requesting you to send me a revised offer letter with the New
Date
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 of joining as per my schedule. I look forward to hearing from you soon Yours Faithfully AK
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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