You went to a museum with your elderly friend last week. However, he/she found it difficult to walk around the museum. Write a letter to the manager and say: * Whom did you visit the museum with? * What problems/inconveniences did he/she face? * also, suggest solutions to enhance the museum visit experience for an elderly person.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to you to express my annoyance with one of the facilities provided in the museum. I, a resident of

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city, visit

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place with my elderly friend who came from another city especially to view the museum.

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, she could not enjoy it properly because it is hard for old people to climb stairs. We faced too much inconvenience over there.

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, lifts are not in working condition due to which there is no other alternative than to use stairs.

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to it, there is no place to sit and relax inside the whole building.

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, It would be really appreciable if you could arrange some sitting places for the elderly places so that they can rest for some time.

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, there is a need to ensure that all the lifts are in working condition. I hope you will look into

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matter and serve the community in a better way. Yours Faithfully, Kuljeet Kaur.

Submitted by kuljeetkaur19941 on Wed Jun 29 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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164 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Accessibility
Mobility issues
Inconveniences
Adequate facilities
Elderly-friendly
Resting areas
Impaired vision/hearing
Ramps
Elevators
Wheelchairs
Motorized scooters
Audio guides
Hearing aid compatibility
Assistive devices
Staff assistance
Special tours
Ergonomic seating
Visual aids
Multisensory exhibits
Inclusive design

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