Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in correct place. (It is fact question) What is your opinion about this??
It is urged by some that making
home
and workplace tidy along with everything Add an article
the home
a home
in
well organised and in Correct your spelling
is
correct
place is vital. In my perspective, I believe that keeping places neat is paramount, and in Add an article
the correct
this
essay, I will explain the reason for my view.
Firstly
, the most compelling reason for holding to my view is that people
should arranged
their houses or workrooms to be well ordered to Change the verb form
arrange
be unwind
because Change the verb form
be unwound
working
table or Add an article
the working
home
with messy stuffs
can make Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
distraction
. Add an article
a distraction
For example
, home
is a good Correct your spelling
place
pace
to relax for everyone and Correct your spelling
place
people
cannot unwind if it is in
a complete mess. Change preposition
apply
Similarly
, people
might not concentrate on working
process and they can easily get angry if the worktable is chaotic with Correct article usage
the working
many stuffs
. Thereby, keeping things in Fix the agreement mistake
much stuff
house
well-organized makes Correct article usage
the house
people
be relaxed and having
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have
good
mindset.
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a good
Secondly
, a further
reason for my position is that house
should be clean to get good
and healthy environment. Add an article
a good
For instance
, people
are unable to get good air if house
is full Add an article
the house
a house
with
dust and other biowastes. Change preposition
of
In addition
, house
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the house
cleaned
and ordered everything neatly makes Add a missing verb
is cleaned
owners
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the owners
to
have a good impression when the guests come Change the verb form
apply
to
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apply
home
. Add an article
the home
Furthermore
, people
can improve their self-discipline by organising or keeping things regularly as they are aware of how to set their items to be neat.
To sum up, I assert that well- arranging the workplace or things in house
is Add an article
the house
principle
. The reasons for Add an article
the principle
a principle
this
are that people
are able to get a healthy life and improve self-control in their lives. Given this
situation, it is imperative that people
should maintain Correct pronoun usage
their dwelling
dwelling
and Fix the agreement mistake
dwellings
place
of work to be clean with in order everything.Fix the agreement mistake
places
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