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You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another company Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months - Say how your work could be done while you are away - Ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Mr John, I am an employee at your company in Oman branch. I would like to request an internal transfer to the
head
office
 in Dubai for six months. I joined your organisation four years as store staff and I want to upgrade my qualification to support work at the store.
Thus
, I want to enrol in Supply Chain training in Dubai which will starts in June and finish in December and I believe attending work from the
head
office
 will allow me to work and learn at the same time. Workwise, I am planning to hand over my physical tasks to my colleague at our
office
 and follow up closely with him. I will arrange weekly online meetings to acknowledge the updates and solve some possible problems that might appear.
Finally
, I would personally upload the monthly report to the section
head
. Would you kindly help me with the arrangements for the transfer process and acceptance from the
head
office
.
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 It is faster when the manager informs the
office
 directly and provides a non-objection letter with the application. Your help is highly appreciated. Yours sincerely, Samah Ismail
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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