Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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In recent world
milions
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millions
of
waste
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produced from home. Many say that household
waste
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is not recycle
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is not recycled
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prooerly
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properly
. They
also
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say that the
government
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can reduce
the
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apply
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waste
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by recycling or taking any legal action.
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with,
people
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usually throw their
waste
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besides
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beside
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house
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the house
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without
reused
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reusing
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them.
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, society put their rubbish
in
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on
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the road while they are
traveled
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travelling
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. General
people
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do that kind of work because they do not have enough knowledge,
how
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of how
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to keep
environment
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the environment
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healthy, they
also
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do not how to properly recover their throw away.
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, they have to be educated
for
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about
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hygiene
environment
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and environment
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health, but they are not
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willing
willling
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willing
to do
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anything
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any thing
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anything
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by
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on
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their own. If
people
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actually
wants
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want
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to recycle
waste
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, they can take help from the
government
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.
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in
ssIn
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addition to
this
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,
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government
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the government
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can take
necessary
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the necessary
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step
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steps
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to reduce all
kind
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kinds
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of
waste
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.
Government
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can teach
human
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humans
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how to recover rubbish through some
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advertisement
advertisment
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advertisements
, teach educational students and
also
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do some activities and
programme
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programmes
show examples
.
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, teach how to use 3R, which means reuse, reduce,
recycle
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and recycle
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.
Government
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can give an extra course
in
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to
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school students
,
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apply
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so that children can learn
recyle
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recycle
their garbage.
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,Besides
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do some
seminar
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seminars
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for the young
people
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, and push them
do
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to do
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the work.
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,
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government
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the governmet
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governmet
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government
can donate
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recycling
cycling
recyclling
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a recyclling
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bag
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bags
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or
junk
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a junk
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bank
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banks
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.
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,
citizen
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a citizen
the citizen
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can restore their
waste
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and
then
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sell them to earn some money, which will help financially poor
people
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. To conclude,
i
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I
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think
government
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can reduce thow out
waste
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by taking some steps, and
also
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people
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have to maintain 3R. I recommended
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government
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the government
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should
strict
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be strict
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to
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with
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the
people
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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