Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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a huge impact on our development. Some are of the belief that allowing

children

the freedom of choice will lead to selfish adults, while others think that

children

should be given the right to choose. In my opinion, a child should be involved in decisions regarding their life. Parents believe that

children

should not be a part of the

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process as it breeds an independent society. Many

children

who are allowed the freedom to do whatever they want tend to be more self-absorbed.

This

might lead to a loss of community.

Additionally

,

Children

are easily manipulated by advertisements, resulting in them asking for all they see in the media. If all their wishes are indulged, they may become more demanding and spoilt. For these reasons, parents choose to decide for their wards.

On the other hand

,

children

should be allowed a choice

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in matters that pertain to their future.

Children

are smart and are aware of their

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surroundings

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and from a certain age can make sensible decisions. Intersex individuals,

for example

, who undergo surgery at an early age often hate their parents because they were not given a chance to choose which organs should be retained.

This

puts a strain on the family's relationship.

Furthermore

, studies have shown that allowing choices aid in the mental development of the child and can

also

increase both their Intelligence quotient and their emotional quotient and they are more decisive as they grow older. In conclusion, It is imperative to involve

children

in

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as it plays a major role in their development and

also

helps foster familial relations.