Human activities has had a negative effect on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.
There are competing views on the negative impacts on both animals and plants by human activities.
Although
numerous people believe that pollution, as an issue caused by humanity, can not be stopped, I still think that natural resources can be a better solution to bring down such
issue.
To begin
, some of the population around the world still have root beliefs about how pollution is not stoppable. Take, as an example, villagers and elders who are afraid of the rapid changes, they tend to have notions that are negatively destroying their psychological health. Although
their age and place of living are the main contributors to their ideas, I still do not see a right point in their way of thinking. Because nowadays scientists are worried about Earth, they have indeed found a solution to stop this
phenomenon.
Currently, natural resources can be considered the best key to changing what is happening to the world. Consider the power of the water, as an instance, which is a great alternative to factories. By using water, our climate will start to have fewer smokes, hence
less air abuse. I think this
point of view is much more convincing since it has been proven and had positive effects.
To conclude, although
there is still a group of society who still think pollution is a problem that can not end, others believe some actions can be accomplished to have it under control. Therefore
, I surely agree with the latter point of view as natural resources assist to put an end to such
a universal problem.Submitted by ezixllo on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite