Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Every culture on good, but
this
planet evolve
differently, to survive they discover traditional Correct subject-verb agreement
evolves
medicines
from what every available around them, and now a days
, modern science is getting more sophisticated and Correct the word
nowadays
develop
lots of Wrong verb form
developing
medicines
and treatments that are proven and available around the world. But many people
still use
the traditional medicines
by them self
and avoid Correct your spelling
themself
themselves
to consult
the Change the verb form
consulting
doctor
. In my opinion, even if people
use
alternative
medicines
still they should visit the
normal Correct article usage
a
doctor
. Otherwise
, it may be
get worse.
Unnecessary verb
apply
To begin
with, alternative
medicines
developed
years Add a missing verb
were developed
a go
, many Correct your spelling
ago
people
are trusting it
and Correct pronoun usage
them
use
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using
it
in their daily life. Today's lifestyle and food Correct pronoun usage
them
different
from our ancienter, and there are many new Add a missing verb
are different
disease
Change to a plural noun
diseases
are
developing every day. If Correct pronoun usage
that are
people
use
home remedies to treat the disease
and wait for several days and they might not know or fill but it may get more severe. For example
, nowadays, diabetes is getting very common. if someone try
to treat it by Change the verb form
tries
Correct your spelling
himself
him self
and Correct your spelling
himself
use
traditional medicines
. they will never know that
it getting Correct word choice
whether
cure
or getting worse without Wrong verb form
cured
consult
Wrong verb form
consulting
the
Correct article usage
a
doctor
. In addition
, they also
not
know, how Add a missing verb
do not
much dose
of traditional Change the quantifier
many doses
medicine
they required base
on their glucose level.
Wrong verb form
based
Furthermore
, Many new disease
are developing, which Change to a plural noun
diseases
initially
fills like common or known disease
and Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
people
try to use
alternative
medicine
, and as a result
, they will not recover from it. And many time
it is Fix the agreement mistake
times
life threatening
. Add a hyphen
life-threatening
For example
, in corona
epidemic, many Correct article usage
the corona
people
are get
sick, and in beginning, it Change the verb form
are getting
feel
like Change the verb form
feels
common
cold Correct article usage
a common
and
some Correct word choice
apply
people
try to use
traditional medicine
or home remedies not visit doctor
, and some of them get severally ill and lose their life.
To Correct article usage
the doctor
concluded
, there are many Change the form of the verb
conclude
disease
which many confuse Change to a plural noun
diseases
people
with other disease
and they take Fix the agreement mistake
diseases
wrong
Correct article usage
the wrong
medicine
or treatment and it Correct your spelling
may
many
Correct your spelling
may
result
Change to a plural noun
results
into
Change preposition
in
serious
Add an article
a serious
problem
, Other Fix the agreement mistake
problems
medicines
Add a missing verb
are
people
should still consider to visit
the actual Change the verb form
visiting
doctor
for Add a hyphen
check-up
check
up even they take Add an article
a check
alternative
medicines
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