The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern

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, there is no doubt that social

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pays too much

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to the private

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life

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of

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, there have been striking controversies revolving around the suggestion that mass

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need to spend more

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finding out about the

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of ordinary

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instead

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. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the fact that the

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of eminent and ordinary

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should be paid

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to all the

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by various types of

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, everyone has the right to have a private

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, even

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. The

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pay too much

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to their

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and relationships which are the thing that doesn't respect others.

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is because the

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including journalism and paparazzi

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can make

celebrities

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uncomfortable and feel insecure providing that the

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annoys them.

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, there are so many accidents that were related to stalking and focusing too much on their privacy.

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, many celebs have problems with their mental health since they must face a lot of journalism every day. On the second thought, there are always exceptions. It seems that the stories of those who are not only well-known but

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are constantly doing good deeds for societies in their daily

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are appropriate and worth spreading for the sake of exemplifying

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great sense of community.

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, that

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act badly would probably have a negative impact on common

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.

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, spending more

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focusing on the

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of ordinary

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is not a better choice for the

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instead

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of stalking

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. To be more precise, most

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all over the world don't want to be significantly taken notice of. The main reason for

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is that it is very unpleasant if they don't have a private

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. What actually matters is that the

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ought to pay

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to the

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of

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and ordinary

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to some extent as long as they feel comfortable. After all, unknown persons should only be given screen

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positively so that their fellow citizens can get motivated to continue working and contributing. In conclusion, I think the

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should limit the focus on other

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's private

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excessively and become more responsible

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careful during the process of printing or broadcasting.

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is not merely for a world where no one is uncomfortable with passive surveillance, but

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for a better perspective in which no one will waste his/ her valuable

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and money watching something

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not of any use.