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Some people believe that women should be treated as equal as men when applying for a job with police or the military.Others think women are less suitable for this kind of job. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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In bygone days, there were only a few career opportunities for
women
.
However
, as times are changing the whole scenario regarding
this
 matter is
also
 modified. Nowadays, it is believed by various people that
women
 should be given an equal chance in selection for
jobs
 that are related to army and police personnel while others are opposing
this
 view.
This
 essay will shed light on both
the
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perspectives before stating my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs. Critics who are against
this
 perspective put across various points.
To begin
 with, according to them, Ladies are having
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responsibilities
responsiblities
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responsibilities
 related to their household work and these professions
demands
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 more time and hard work,
therefore
, it will become more difficult for them to perform their official task on time because of their personal lives.
For instance
,
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 lady needs to accomplish her
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household
houshehold
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household
 chores,
such
 as, cooking and looking after children etc. which can create
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 in their performance related to official tasks.
In addition
 to it,
this
 category of
jobs
require
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 more activeness and physical strength and It is considered that
this
 group have less physical strength than other groups. There are various aspects due to which many experts find
women
 suitable for these
jobs
.
Firstly
,
Women
 play a vital role,
thus
, they have an equal chance to choose
profession
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 according to their
wish
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.
Secondly
, It will benefit the whole nation as
this
 category have the power of patience which will benefit the country
to
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 take
correct
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 decision.
Additionally
,
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 of
women
 in
military
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 will help to resolve the conflicts as
women
 are having better skills
of
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 team coordination when compared to men.
Although
 there are some shortcomings it yet if I consider it logically I think the latter view is more powerful and effective. According to my point of view, these problems will not
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 their duty and they can perform work similar to men. Before joining they have to indulge in
a
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training which makes them physically strong. Apart from
this
, training can
also
be provide
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 after
joining
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 phase to make them mentally fit so that they can balance their professional as well as domestic life. To sum
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 are both
the
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views to the above-said question.
However
, In my
opinion
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 it is totally
unjustice
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 to
women
 if they are deprived
from
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 these
jobs
.
Also
,
nation
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 will
also
 miss the potential and
ablities
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abilities
 which are possessed by
this
 part of the society. So, I believe there should be equality in terms of hiring an employee.
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