The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops on cities and towns closing. Do you agree or disagree?
Today, the internet is an important technology, changing the world. Online shopping is just one of its usages, which is constantly growing. For reasons that will be discussed, I agree that retail jobs at local scales (
such
as markets in towns or cities) were being closed due to the growth of home shopping.
In our crowded world, Linking Words
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is defined as a crucial word for people. The development of electronic shopping can save Use synonyms
time
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firstly
because of its fast accessibility. It reduces the required Linking Words
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to shop by eliminating some activities Use synonyms
such
as physical shopping, driving, choosing and decision-making in shopping. In the other words, people can make their purchases at any Linking Words
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, whether at home or at work. E-shopping is a blessing for mothers and working people, who do not have free Use synonyms
time
to go shopping.
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Secondly
, Online shopping has a wide range of access on a global scale that will be available anywhere. It makes e-shopping not limited to a specific place. To exemplify it, an Iranian person can buy any stuff from a foreign market Linking Words
such
as amazon. Linking Words
Additionally
, while e-shopping markets provide a variety of goods for customers, in the local and town shopping centres the number of items is limited. Linking Words
Hence
, they can choose appropriate items based on their need and rational cost.
In Conclusion, it can be said that three main reasons, namely saving Linking Words
time
, global accessibility and a variety of options (prices and items) make online shopping more useful in comparison with in-person shopping. Use synonyms
Accordingly
, electronic shops will replace local shops.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite