At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people. Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

These days, the majority of the

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in many countries is

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at a young age resulting in a less old

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in society. Some reckon that these contribute to more drawbacks than benefits, while others and I believe that the situation will provide more beneficial conditions to the

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. In

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essay, both pros and cons of a higher

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of working stage generations will be discussed before my conclusion will be reached. On the one hand, an excessive

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of young adults can lead to crowded congestion in the metropolitan area. As

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who are in the working stage are likely to move to the urban area in order to search for the opportunity to get a better job which the prestigious companies are always located in the big city.

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, according to the statistic from the administration, the

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of

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who come from the countryside working in Bangkok is accounted for 80 per cent of the total Bangkok

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.

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, their age is ranged from 25 - 50 years old, which are young ages.

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, there are much more benefits to the

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for having a higher

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of the young generation.

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of all, the government can collect a huge amount of taxes from these groups because they're still working and can pay the taxes from their income. Comparably, the authority needs to spend a tremendous amount of tax to take care of retired

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, the middle-aged group is more productive compared to older

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, which is able to drive the

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forward. To illustrate, in 1996, Thailand is considered the baby boomer generation, the GDP of the

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was around 5.6, which is the highest value over the decades.

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, working stage group can make a lot of advantages to the country. In conclusion, while having a younger

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as the core of the

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will cause some drawbacks, I still believe that

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will bring more advantages to the

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due to a higher amount of taxes, and more productivity.

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the future of the

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depends on the young generation.