Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
Healthy nutrition in today's Society is a huge topic. The amount of
sugar
in multiple manufactured food and Use synonyms
drink
products Use synonyms
are
an often discussed problem. It's scientifically proven that it can cause several health issues Correct subject-verb agreement
is
such
as diabetes, high blood pressure or heart problems. Some people think that the price of sugary products should be raised so that customers are encouraged to eat and Linking Words
drink
less Use synonyms
sugar
. I don't agree and believe that there are better ways to do so. An alternative way to eat or Use synonyms
drink
less Use synonyms
sugar
is using sweeteners. A good example of reducing the amount of Use synonyms
the
sweet sin one consumes is drinking Correct article usage
apply
sugar
-free soft drinks Use synonyms
instead
of the original variant. You can Linking Words
also
use a variety of sweeteners at home Linking Words
for instance
in your yoghurt or the morning coffee. A problem is that some people have intolerances to artificial sweeteners but these are less harmful than the diseases real Linking Words
sugar
can cause. Raising the price for goods that contain high levels of Use synonyms
sugar
will not make people Use synonyms
consuming
it is less Wrong verb form
consume
cause
even the most common food Correct your spelling
because
such
as bread or pasta is made with it. If customers are used to Linking Words
have
Change the verb form
having
e.g
a specific sweet Correct your spelling
e.g.
drink
they like it's very unlikely that they skip drinking it just because the price goes up. Family doctors should be involved by offering regular body checkups and information about the most common diseases caused by our way of life. In conclusion, I believe that every individual should decide what and how much to eat or Use synonyms
drink
on its own. The important thing to know is how to still maintain a well-balanced nourishment. It's better to raise awareness about alternative substitutes Use synonyms
as well as
more advertising and education about a healthier way to enjoy food or drinks.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite