Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this opinion.

Language is the way of communication among mankind over the world. There are
thousand
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of
languages
in the world, but in recent years various
languages
are vanished
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vanish
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. Many argue that
this
is not essential as lives will go smoothly if there are a small number of
languages
. I believe, it will be easy to travel,
study
and do international business if there are a couple of
languages
.
First
of all, fewer
languages
are helped people to travel and
study
abroad.
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, if someone wants to go
Canada
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to Canada
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for
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to
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travelling and
study
from
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in
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Bangladesh
, they ought to know
english
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, because both
country
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countries
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has different
languages
. For going to Canada
any
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for any
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reason they must know
english
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English
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. In
bangladesh
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Bangladesh
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,
there
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their
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mother tongue is
bangla
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Bangla
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,
most
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and most
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of the people
in
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apply
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here do not know
english
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very well.
Therefore
,
who
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those who
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are
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is
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wanted to go outside their country for
traveling
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travelling
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or
study
purpose
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purposes
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,
they
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apply
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are facing some harassment because of the language problem. In
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addition
additiona
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addition
to
this
, one or two
languages
are made international work easier. Bata
for
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,for
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instance, Bata is a shoe company in
bangladesh
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Bangladesh
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, they expand their business to
kolkata
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Kolkata
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.
This
company easily establish their band outside
Bangladesh
, because both places used
same
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the same
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language. It will be hard if there was
a
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apply
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several
languages
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language
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.
Furthermore
, for extending business or
create
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creating
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a job
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job
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jobs
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overseas , there should have a few
languages
. To conclude, it is for
these reason
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these reasons
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i
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I
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think that fewer
languages
can make
humans
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human
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life happier. They can go everywhere without any hesitation, and
also
can go for a career. I recommended every country should teach and learn
few
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a few
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or
same
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the same
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languages
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Endangered languages
  • Homogenization
  • Multilingualism
  • Language preservation
  • Cognitive benefits
  • Global communication
  • Intellectual diversity
  • Ecological knowledge
  • Cultural traditions
  • Communication barriers
  • Preservation efforts
  • Technological solutions
  • Language revival
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