Some people feel that equality between the genders has already been achieved while others feel there is considerable progress to be made. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
According to some
people
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,people
men
and women
both are considered equal in the
society while others believe that, still there is a need Correct article usage
apply
of
progression to attain Change preposition
for
this
equality. I completely agree with those who claim that efforts are still required to completely demolish this
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gender-based
gender based
inequality.
Some people claim that in Add a hyphen
gender-based
this
modernised world, there is no more disparity regarding the
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apply
gender
. This
is because nowadays, women
have made a lot of progress in all the fields such
as army, aerospace and certain sports such
as boxing which were predominated by men
in the past years. Moreover
, due to higher
literacy Correct article usage
the higher
rate
there is no Add a comma
,rate
gender
discrimination . To illustrate, in a survey in France, it was found that presently, there are more women
pilots as compared to men
which was
considered as completely a male Change the verb form
were
dominant
profession in the back days. Replace the word
dominated
Therefore
, raised education levels have made it possible to Correct your spelling
achieve
achive
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achieve
this
equality in the gender
.
On the other hand
, many believe that still a lot of progression
is required pertaining to Change to a plural noun
progressions
this
aspect of the
society. To elaborate, in many nations, people still think that few tasks are only made for Correct article usage
apply
women
such
as household chores. In addition
to this
, in many countries still
there is a disparity between a boy and a girl when they are born. Add a comma
,still
For instance
, in many parts of India, birth
of a boy is considered much better and Add an article
the birth
positive
as compared to a girl child. Henceforth, Correct quantifier usage
more positive
spread
of awareness is still required in Add an article
the spread
this
matter to diminish this
discripancy
forever.
To Correct your spelling
discrepancy
conculde
, there is no doubt that Correct your spelling
conclude
presently
in most Replace the word
present
of
the nations Change preposition
apply
women
are considered equally as men
. However
, I believe that in most of
the developing countries Change preposition
apply
this
disparity is prevalent and lot
of efforts are required to mitigate Change the article
a lot
this
issue for the betterment of society as well as country
.Add an article
the country
a country
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