Write a 150 word letter to a family who are looking for some one to live with them and take care of six year old.

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My name is Raju Hassan, I am a student of Weston University, and I live in Australia for

studies

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my studies

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. Recently, an advertisement caught my interest in the "People To Hire" section of the "Daily Magazine" that you're searching for someone who can look after your

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six-year-old

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six-year old

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six-year-old

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son. I was looking for a job in which I can earn a decent wage, as well as a place to live nearby my university, which would be an additional benefit to cut my monthly expenses of paying rent for a room, here at my university hostel. I would

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like you to know, that I hold prior experience of

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babysitting

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baby sitting

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babysitting

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, as I am a very humble and friendly person, due to

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nature I was quite a fan among the children, at my previous employment.

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, I am very polite in getting along with the kids, which makes our relationship mutual. In my free time, I like to read books. Please do contact me on my cell phone number

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that

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which

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is 007785614-5, I would be more than happy to answer your queries

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apply

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if any. I will be looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Raju

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

194 words

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Write a 150 word letter to a family who are looking for some one to live with them and take care of six year old.

The Greeting

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