Write a 150 word letter to a family who are looking for some one to live with them and take care of six year old.

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Raju Hassan, I am a student of Weston University, and I live in Australia for my studies. Recently, an advertisement caught my interest in the "People To Hire" section of the "Daily Magazine" that you're searching for someone who can look after your six-year-old son. I was looking for a job in which I can earn a decent wage, as well as a place to live nearby my university, which would be an additional benefit to cut my monthly expenses of paying rent for a room, here at my university hostel. I would

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like you to know, that I hold prior experience of babysitting, as I am a very humble and friendly person, due to

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nature I was quite a fan among the children, at my previous employment.

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, I am very polite in getting along with the kids, which makes our relationship mutual. In my free time, I like to read books. Please do contact me on my cell phone number

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is 007785614-5, I would be more than happy to answer your queries

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if any. I will be looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Raju

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

195 words

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Write a 150 word letter to a family who are looking for some one to live with them and take care of six year old.

The Greeting

Should Children be encouraged to be competitive in sports and other activities? Or is it better for them to learn the benefits of co-operating with other people? Discuss both these views and give your own answer.

Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in cities.what are the reasons? Do advantages of their developmenth outweigt it's disadvantages

Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that school children should study history as a main subject. Others think that others subject are more important for children in modern society. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.