Write a 150 word letter to a family who are looking for some one to live with them and take care of six year old.

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Raju Hassan, I am a student of Weston University, and I live in Australia for my studies. Recently, an advertisement caught my interest in the "People To Hire" section of the "Daily Magazine" that you're searching for someone who can look after your six-year-old son. I was looking for a job in which I can earn a decent wage, as well as a place to live nearby my university, which would be an additional benefit to cut my monthly expenses of paying rent for a room, here at my university hostel. I would
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like you to know, that I hold prior experience of babysitting, as I am a very humble and friendly person, due to
this
nature I was quite a fan among the children, at my previous employment.
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, I am very polite in getting along with the kids, which makes our relationship mutual. In my free time, I like to read books. Please do contact me on my cell phone number
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is 007785614-5, I would be more than happy to answer your queries
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if any. I will be looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Raju
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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