The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

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human copying has polarized public opinion . Few folks opine that the
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in an advantageous way , while other cliques of men divulge that it is contemptible by society or
people
and only brings drawbacks with it .
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there are prolific points to agree with the meritorious side which is alteration . To be more specific , they are using the new products
instead
of the normal thing .
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several
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of
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clothes or
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bags .
In addition
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through
this
phenomenon , so she had a huge income
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each month because she
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.
By contrast
, it is predicted that the thorns of
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area can not be neglected . The most worrying aspect is
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people
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reach
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and the main reason are the fashion and consumer goods . For an instance , Huda is
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selling
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selling
her house and car to
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humans
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. To be honest , it is
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hard life compared with the past . Another negative outlook is breakthrough the
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. To reword , they do not have any private life due to they share everything in the social media so , the
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of the poor
people
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get same , on the
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contrary
, if we do not have
this
phenomenon . Actually , the person should
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a new style without any copying . To summarize the composition , the essay explicated the advantages of
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of
human
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to copy , not only but it
also
shed light on it is disadvantages , Regarding
this
, the cons of it outweigh the pros , so I fully disagree with it .
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