Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t. Discuss both these points of views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, with employers

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the importance of communication skills, employees are asked to be able to

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in public. Someone

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that schools should introduce

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for children. In

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agree with the statement. In terms of the reason why

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don’t expect to learn these

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,

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speech

will make speakers feel sick.

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funding shows that when

people

have a

speech

in front of others, they will feel scared. They

also

have panic attacks because of the presentation assessment.

Therefore

, it is unwise to teach students

speeches

and presentations. On top of that, students need to pay more attention to their academic tests

instead

of

speeches

.

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because they need to speed half of a week preparing their presentation. It

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the reason why others believe that teenagers need to learn about

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, it will be beneficial for their future.

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because when they enter the workplace, their bosses hope that their staff can have better performance in the presentation. On top of that, handling

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oral

skill

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can let

people

deliver their message clearly and become more self-confident. It will be good for children’s

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development. In conclusion, some

people

think

speech

classes shouldn’t be added

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to curriculum design because children always feel nervous

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speeches

.

However

, I believe that

speeches

can encourage youngsters to show their personality, and they

also

get more opportunities in the workplace.