The average standard of people health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowlegde or experience.

In the contemporary epoch,there is irrefutable debate about the state of

peoples

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health

.The mean level of

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well-being is probably to be beneath in the years to come than it is today.I firmly coincide

and

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withstand the stated notion because of unhealthy eating habits, challenging economy and pollution.

This

discourse will

further

elucidate my assertion in the

forth coming

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paragraph.

Firstly

,

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years to come,the well-being of people will be deteriorating and the pivotal element is pollution due to plenty of carbon

emission

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in the

environment

and

use

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the use

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of chemicals during farming despite the nations coming up with

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policy

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that eradicate

this

hitch

that is

causing cancer.

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,

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unhealthy

healthy

unheathy

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unhealthy

eating habits are very common in

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society

although

some of

this

behaviour

are

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caused by

unfriendly

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an unfriendly

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economy

as a result

leading to escalating non-communicable

diseases

.

For

example

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research done by the University of Nairobi depicts that 50% of aged will be having comorbidity in the

next

10 years.

Consequently

,

environment

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is

such

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habitat for causative elements of

diseases

and

this

trend is becoming worse

everyday

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so it will continue affecting the

fittness

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fitness

of people in the time ahead.

Secondly

,the current

health

of people is still below average despite technology evolving to detect

diseases

early and initiate treatment in advance so that the harm can be terminated.

On the other hand

,adulteration of the food and

environment

is still there and they are vital in causing illness

although

the state is following up through supervision and engaging law

enforcers

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officers in the implementation of rules and

regulation

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to cease the acts.

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,

a

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research done by Kenyatta University depicts that the rate of cancer has drastically increased.

Therefore

,the

pesent

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present

state of

health

is

worring

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worrying

working

despite machinery to detect

diseases

early. To sum up,

i

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would like to restate my perspective that

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in spite

inspite

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in spite

technology advancement,the

health

of

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society is at risk because of

uncontrolled

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environment

,bad eating habits and tough economic times

as a result

, the future

well being

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of the community will be underneath.