The average standard of people health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowlegde or experience.

In the contemporary epoch,there is irrefutable debate about the state of

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well-being is probably to be beneath in the years to come than it is today.I firmly coincide with and withstand the stated notion because of unhealthy eating habits, challenging economy and pollution.

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discourse will

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elucidate my assertion in the forthcoming paragraph.

Firstly

,in several years to come,the well-being of people will be deteriorating and the pivotal element is pollution due to plenty of carbon emissions in the

environment

and the use of chemicals during farming despite the nations coming up with policies that eradicate

this

hitch

that is

causing cancer.

In addition

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unhealthy

healthy

unheathy

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unhealthy

eating habits are very common in

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society

although

some of

this

behaviour is caused by an unfriendly economy

as a result

leading to escalating non-communicable

diseases

.

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research done by the University of Nairobi depicts that 50% of aged will be having comorbidity in the

next

10 years.

Consequently

,the

environment

is

such

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habitat for causative elements of

diseases

and

this

trend is becoming worse every day so it will continue affecting the fitness of people in the time ahead.

Secondly

,the current

health

of people is still below average despite technology evolving to detect

diseases

early and initiate treatment in advance so that the harm can be terminated.

On the other hand

,adulteration of the food and

environment

is still there and they are vital in causing illness

although

the state is following up through supervision and engaging law enforcement officers in the implementation of rules and regulations to cease the acts.

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research done by Kenyatta University depicts that the rate of cancer has drastically increased.

Therefore

,the present state of

health

is worrying despite machinery to detect

diseases

early. To sum up,

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would like to restate my perspective that in spite technology advancement,the

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of

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society is at risk because of the uncontrolled

environment

,bad eating habits and tough economic times

as a result

, the future well-being of the community will be underneath.