The average standard of people health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowlegde or experience.

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well-being is probably to be beneath in the years to come than it is today.I firmly coincide with and withstand the stated notion because of unhealthy eating habits, challenging economy and pollution.

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elucidate my assertion in the forthcoming paragraph.

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,in several years to come,the well-being of people will be deteriorating and the pivotal element is pollution due to plenty of carbon emissions in the

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and the use of chemicals during farming despite the nations coming up with policies that eradicate

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causing cancer.

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eating habits are very common in

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society

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some of

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behaviour is caused by an unfriendly economy

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leading to escalating non-communicable

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research done by the University of Nairobi depicts that 50% of aged will be having comorbidity in the

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10 years.

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habitat for causative elements of

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trend is becoming worse every day so it will continue affecting the fitness of people in the time ahead.

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,the current

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of people is still below average despite technology evolving to detect

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early and initiate treatment in advance so that the harm can be terminated.

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,adulteration of the food and

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is still there and they are vital in causing illness

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the state is following up through supervision and engaging law enforcement officers in the implementation of rules and regulations to cease the acts.

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research done by Kenyatta University depicts that the rate of cancer has drastically increased.

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,the present state of

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is worrying despite machinery to detect

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early. To sum up,

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would like to restate my perspective that in spite technology advancement,the

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society is at risk because of the uncontrolled

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,bad eating habits and tough economic times

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, the future well-being of the community will be underneath.