Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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to different countries where their native

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seems to be alien to them. Some suggest that

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is causing some social problems. I completely disagree with

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notion as it brings the world closer than creating issues. Humans have always

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to a distant land where there are different languages but the

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and migrants have most of the time learned the native languages and took interest in the cultures of

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, in Germany where there are a huge number of settlers from different countries, who not just settled

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but even learn German to reduce the

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barrier to communicate with locals and they live in harmony.

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is not an issue for most as

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learn new languages if they are required to do so. It has often

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that especially immigrants in western countries are very helpful towards

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, they often extend a helping hand to

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their own hardship when they needed and someone helped them,

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a better society. Canada is the best example of

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an incident, when a maple

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family had a setback in their business due to COVID as their huge export order was

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citizens from Canada came forward to place orders so that the maple syrup producers could survive through COVID. So, living in a country with a different

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make

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more empathetic toward

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. To conclude, living in a place with

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does not create problems

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whether

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learn the

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of the land they are living

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these

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are generally more considerate of

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which ultimately

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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linguistic proficiency
cross-cultural communication
miscommunication
social integration
linguistic alienation
cultural dissonance
language acquisition
communication breakdown
interpreter services
language courses
bilingualism
multilingualism
language barrier
effective communication
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