More and more people are seriously overweight. Some people suggest the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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has polarized public opinion . Few folks opine that the government should be increasing the price of

food

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to get

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the

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overweight serves the interest of it is

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presence in an advantageous way , while other cliques of men divulge that it is contemptible by society or people and only brings drawbacks with it .

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, the main

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essay

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to throw light on the pros and the cons of

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dubious matter . At the start , there are prolific points to agree with the meritorious side which is income . To be more specific , they are increasing the level of

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income by

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step . In

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, the ministry will get considerable money compared

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a huge number of money which is 500,000 R.O each month because they

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did it . Another positive outlook is

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.

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, they are saving it is citizens by

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the price in all

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. Actually , they are

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buying

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eating

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fast

food

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rather than healthy

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subsequently

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is the problem . As we know ,

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fast

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food

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had the highest negative

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dinner every

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from outside that why she had overweight .

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, she can not stays one day without it , so it is a really good idea to stop these kinds of

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humans .

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area can not be neglected . The most worrying aspect is the priority . As we know , the

food

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basis

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human

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health ,

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no one can

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without it . Actually , some of the persons

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good income ,

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subsequently

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they can not buy enough goods . To be honest , these days became significantly hard for these humans ,especially the poor people . To summarize the composition , the essay

explecated

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the advantages of growing the products to decrease the overweight, not only but it

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shed light on it is the disadvantages . Regarding

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discourse , the pros outweigh the cons so , I fully agree

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with

eith

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low .