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Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel stressful than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their life easier?

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In recent days,Human
life
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 becomes very complex due to the office
workload
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.Employees feel more complexity than before due to extra
hours
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 .In
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 ,essay we will discuss what are the primary cause as well as what kind of resolutions can the
company
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 consider to reduce the employer's
workload
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.
Life
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 is the most beautiful world for everyone including wives,Parents,and children.But in today's world,We are not able to feel the happiness of it.
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 is due to the dramatic increase in working
hours
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 which leads to a more stressful
life
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.For InstanceUsually
Employers
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 are allowed to
work
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 as per the Standard business working
hours
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.
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 , a high volume of
workload
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 and tasks deliverable along with project delivery to the customer enables the
Employers
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 to
work
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 more than business
hours
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 .
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 causes them to miss their personal
life
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 as well as causes major physical health issues. The
company
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 plays a critical role in labour robotic
life
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.It is a
company
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's responsibility to allocate
workload
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 based on experience and skill set.
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,In Japan ,
Employers
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 are allowed to take a small nap during business
hours
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 because of
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 they feel refreshed and there was a survey conducted by a Journalist Mr Robert,Small breaks during long working
hours
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 will improve the productivity of the
company
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 along with
employers
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 were satisfied.
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 to
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,
Company
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 could take
employers
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 a day out after completion of the projects will gain trust and high efficiency in future tasks. To sum up,
Work
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 is the most needed one to survive in
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 society.In spite,stress is a part of
work
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,So we could not able to
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.But it is Employee and Employer's responsibility to provide some refreshment to the mind which will relieve tension and concentrate on the family and
work
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comfortable lifestyle
  • make ends meet
  • culture of 'presenteeism'
  • job insecurity
  • technological advancements
  • constant connectivity
  • globalization
  • irregular work hours
  • flexible working schedules
  • work-life balance
  • employee training and development
  • productivity
  • efficiency
  • healthier work environment
  • mental health resources
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