It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Despite the turmoil over the recent decade, it is important to consider the impact of

decisions

on people’s

lives

. It is believed that impulsive

decisions

are quintessential in people’s private and career

lives

;

however

, I adopt the notion that individuals should scrutinize every step they take life for their safety. In the following essay, both merits and demerits of

this

idea will be discussed thoroughly and I will explain my opinion. On the one hand, despite my disagreement, proponents propose that risky steps boost people’s

lives

in different aspects.

This

is because when people tackle challenging situations, they will encounter new experiences that will ultimately improve their interpersonal skills. A prime example of

this

is Steve Jobs who

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commissioned

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of awareness campaigns that urge citizens to step out of their comfort zones

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and seize opportunities.

Thus

, what can be said from

this

example is that unplanned settlements can be beneficial in terms of gaining life experiences.

On the other hand

, opponents and I are of the belief that taking risks in work and family life has a myriad of demerits. The most important of which is that if youth launch start-up businesses without planning, they will eventually lose their financial sources.

For instance

, many Egyptian entrepreneurs lose their fortunes as they do not conduct

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before they start their enterprises.

Furthermore

, when the issue is tackled from a social perspective, it can be witnessed that many disruptive families, nowadays, result from impulsive marriage

decisions

.

Therefore

, without

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planning of future

decisions

, not only do people face financial obstacles, but they

also

suffer from disturbed relationships. In conclusion, after

this

essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, I can reiterate that while a percentage of people discern quick

decisions

as a positive virtue in order to gain new experiences, I am a staunch believer that the demerits of these

decisions

immensely surpass their merits in both social and professional aspects since these dangerous arrangements may eventually have detrimental consequences on individuals’

lives

.