Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always good. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the debatable concepts of today's world is
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time
. A bunch of personages claim that they are relaxing when they do the same things without any
change
is a just argument , howbeit there are some who express disagreement with it and buttress
change
in their life .
In addition
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, I will explicate both stances before presenting my opinion . On one hand , the crusaders of the roten express their support on valid grounds .
Firstly
, the simplest exposition is protection . To be more specific , they are
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scaring
when they are doing a new idea ,
on the contrary
, if they are staying in the same job or house .
For example
, Ali can not
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without his private room .
Moreover
, another point to put here is comfort.
In other words
, they are relaxing completely because they face the same action
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all day that why they are more comfortable
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compared
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compared
with
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other humans . For an instance , the employees in their function
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see the same kind of work every
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. Reasoning on the other side , partisans of
change
proffered plentiful reasons to show their prospectus . In the
first
place , development . To rewords , as we know they see
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considerable development in all areas of life , So they should pay attention to
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,especially in spend their
time
. Actually , they must be using
this
time
in
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successful way
such
as Reem . To be honest , she is a really
smarte
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smart
girl .
In addition
, she uses her
time
to reach her goals . Another outlook of them is income . They are increasing sharply the level of income through
change
. By way of explanation , they
change
their function for an instance , Ali and Salem
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the salary which
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1,000 R.O and 5,000 R.O respectively . As we can see the salary of
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was the highest and the main reason is
change
. To
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the composition , the essay explicated both views with credible examples . Regarding
this
discourse ,
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the
second
view had advantages
outwiegh
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outweigh
the
first
opinion . So , I fully agree with
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in our
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lives
life
lifes
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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