In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree

It is common that most countries use people with
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to participate in public services. Even though some believe that every convict should
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to prison
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their
crimes
, I would argue that it is essential to utilise them in communical
activities
for a greater benefit.
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, sentencing all offenders
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imprisonment will make them anxious and
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with serious
crimes
such
as organized
crimes
and murder will impose
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certain negativity on mentality.
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with a minor case of the drug may ultimately end up developing connections with convicts and might later absorb into crime rings.
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in social
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instead
, it will be more beneficial for
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society and
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will improve their mind positively avoid
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in
such
bad
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On the other hand
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developing correction facilities the related funding,
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could be used
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public welfare
such
as health care, education and social security as it is expensive to maintain correction facilities for every offender out of the government’s money. As a consequence, more taxpayer money will be needed in order to
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and
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prisons.
However
, if increase the use felons of
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crimes
in welfare
activities
,
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will be beneficial for the national economy by saving expenses as well
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having free labour throughout to use
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public benefit. In conclusion, even though some believe that prison is the ultimate destiny for any breach of law and order, it is my firm belief that utilising offenders in social and communal
activities
will develop their attitudes and will benefit
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the economy in many ways.
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