In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree

It is common that most countries use people with

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criminal

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to participate in public services. Even though some believe that every convict should

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to prison

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their

crimes

, I would argue that it is essential to utilise them in communical

activities

for a greater benefit.

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, sentencing all offenders

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imprisonment will make them anxious and

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.

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is because it allows them to interact and socialise with

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with serious

crimes

such

as organized

crimes

and murder will impose

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certain negativity on mentality.

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, an athlete

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with a minor case of the drug may ultimately end up developing connections with convicts and might later absorb into crime rings.

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such

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used

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in social

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, it will be more beneficial for

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society and

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will improve their mind positively avoid

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in

such

bad

activities

further

.

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developing correction facilities the related funding,

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could be used

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public welfare

such

as health care, education and social security as it is expensive to maintain correction facilities for every offender out of the government’s money. As a consequence, more taxpayer money will be needed in order to

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and

expanding

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prisons.

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, if increase the use felons of

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crimes

in welfare

activities

,

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will be beneficial for the national economy by saving expenses as well

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having free labour throughout to use

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public benefit. In conclusion, even though some believe that prison is the ultimate destiny for any breach of law and order, it is my firm belief that utilising offenders in social and communal

activities

will develop their attitudes and will benefit

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the economy in many ways.