In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree
It is common that most countries use people with
light
criminal Add an article
a light
offence
to participate in public services. Even though some believe that every convict should Fix the agreement mistake
offences
sentenced
to prison Change the verb form
be sentenced
against
their Change preposition
for
crimes
, I would argue that it is essential to utilise them in communical activities
for a greater benefit.
Firstly
, sentencing all offenders into
Change preposition
to
an
imprisonment will make them anxious and Remove the article
apply
stress
. Wrong verb form
stressed
This
is because it allows them to interact and socialise with other prisoner
Change the wording
another prisoner
other prisoners
whom
Correct pronoun usage
who
charged
with serious Add a missing verb
are charged
crimes
such
as organized crimes
and murder will impose a
certain negativity on mentality. Remove the article
apply
For example
, an athlete whom
Correct pronoun usage
who
involved
with a minor case of the drug may ultimately end up developing connections with convicts and might later absorb into crime rings. Add a missing verb
is involved
In contrast
, if such
lighter charged
Add a hyphen
lighter-charged
individual
Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
used
in social Add a missing verb
are used
activities
instead
, it will be more beneficial for the
society and Correct article usage
apply
such
will improve their mind positively avoid involving
in Wrong verb form
involved
such
bad activities
further
.
On the other hand
, instead
developing correction facilities the related funding, Add the preposition
ofinstead
which
could be used Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
public welfare Change preposition
for
such
as health care, education and social security as it is expensive to maintain correction facilities for every offender out of the government’s money. As a consequence, more taxpayer money will be needed in order to servicing
and Change the verb
service
expanding
prisons. Wrong verb form
expand
However
, if increase the use felons of lighter
Change preposition
for lighter
crimes
in welfare activities
, it
will be beneficial for the national economy by saving expenses as well Correct pronoun usage
apply
by
having free labour throughout to use Correct word choice
as
in
public benefit.
In conclusion, even though some believe that prison is the ultimate destiny for any breach of law and order, it is my firm belief that utilising offenders in social and communal Change preposition
for
activities
will develop their attitudes and will benefit to
the economy in many ways.Change preposition
apply
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