The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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I will describe a chart that shows the
number
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of
Japanese
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visitors travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and
Australia
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’s share of the
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tourist market.
According to
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the first chart, the
number
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of
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visitors visiting abroad has increased each year except for 1991.
Initially
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, In 1985 about 5
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tourists
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from Japan travelled and after 10 years
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number
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got trebled approximately.
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in 1985, About 2
million
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Japanese
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tourists
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went to
Australia
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. From 1985 until 1988, The
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of
Japanese
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travellers in
Australia
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increased dramatically. Beginning from 2
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tourists
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in 1985, It reached
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about 5
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in 1988. From 1989, The
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fell slightly, But from 1990 to 1994 the
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has risen.
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, the
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of
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visitors who went to
Australia
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in 1994 decreased.
finally
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, The 2 charts show us the increase
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Japanese
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tourists
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travelling to different countries
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the
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of
tourists
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in
Australia
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in particular
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, japanese, million, tourists, australia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • decade
  • fluctuation
  • consistent growth
  • market share
  • peak
  • period
  • significant
  • trend
  • indicate
  • tourism industry
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