The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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I will describe a chart that shows the
number
of
Japanese
visitors travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and
Australia
’s share of the
Japanese
tourist market.
According to
the first chart, the
number
of
Japanese
visitors visiting abroad has increased each year except for 1991.
Initially
, In 1985 about 5
million
tourists
from Japan travelled and after 10 years
this
number
got trebled approximately.
Also
in 1985, About 2
million
Japanese
tourists
went to
Australia
. From 1985 until 1988, The
number
of
Japanese
travellers in
Australia
increased dramatically. Beginning from 2
million
tourists
in 1985, It reached
to
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about 5
million
in 1988. From 1989, The
number
fell slightly, But from 1990 to 1994 the
number
has risen.
However
, the
number
of
Japanese
visitors who went to
Australia
in 1994 decreased.
finally
, The 2 charts show us the increase
of
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Japanese
tourists
travelling to different countries
as well as
the
number
of
tourists
in
Australia
in particular
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, japanese, million, tourists, australia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • decade
  • fluctuation
  • consistent growth
  • market share
  • peak
  • period
  • significant
  • trend
  • indicate
  • tourism industry
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