The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
In
this
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report
I will describe a chart that shows the Add a comma
,report
number
of Use synonyms
Japanese
visitors travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Use synonyms
Australia
’s share of the Use synonyms
Japanese
tourist market.
Use synonyms
According to
the first chart, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
Japanese
visitors visiting abroad has increased each year except for 1991. Use synonyms
Initially
, In 1985 about 5 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
tourists
from Japan travelled and after 10 years Use synonyms
this
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number
got trebled approximately. Use synonyms
Also
in 1985, About 2 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
Japanese
Use synonyms
tourists
went to Use synonyms
Australia
. From 1985 until 1988, The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
Japanese
travellers in Use synonyms
Australia
increased dramatically. Beginning from 2 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
tourists
in 1985, It reached Use synonyms
to
about 5 Change preposition
apply
million
in 1988. From 1989, The Use synonyms
number
fell slightly, But from 1990 to 1994 the Use synonyms
number
has risen. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
Japanese
visitors who went to Use synonyms
Australia
in 1994 decreased.
Use synonyms
finally
, The 2 charts show us the increase Linking Words
of
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in
Japanese
Use synonyms
tourists
travelling to different countries Use synonyms
as well as
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
in Use synonyms
Australia
Use synonyms
in particular
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