"prevention is better than cure". out of country's health budget a large proportion should be deverted from treatment in spending on health education and prevention measures.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statment.

It is true that

countries

spend millions of dollars on

health

care.

However

, some believe that "

prevention

is better than cure" and a large

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proportion

proprtion

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portion

of the

budget

should be allocated to

health

education and

prevention

measures. I partially agree with

this

statement and

this

essay will discuss the reasons.

To begin

with,

countries

with free

health

care systems

such

as

Sri

Lanka, India and Canada are beneficial for their citizens to gain medical care for free.

This

is possible because the

budget

is completely allocated for the

treatments

.

For instance

, in

Sri

Lanka

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even expensive

treatments

such

as Kidney transplants are done for free or for a fraction of the price. If the

countries

limit their

budget

the public who cannot afford expensive

treatments

has to seek alternative

treatments

since the

government

will not provide free medical

treatments

.

Therefore

, diverting a large proportion of

budget

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to

prevention

and

health

education will cause certain issues.

On the other hand

, reducing the money for

treatments

and using it for

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cure

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has certain advantages

such

as people will be more healthy and will lower the death rate

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cause

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by

accidents

. The main cause

for

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death in

Sri

Lanka is

accidents

. Around five to seven people die every day from road

accidents

.If

government

spend money on developing infrastructure facilities

such

as building more sidewalks,

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more

on

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security cameras and speed detectors together with tightening the laws will reduce road

accidents

substantially.

Moreover

, the authorities can introduce programs to promote healthy eating. According to the World

Health

Organisation (WHO) more than half

Sri

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Lankans suffer from diabetes, cancer and obesity.If the

government

promote farming and cultivation and reduce the price of vegetables and fruits a healthy society will be created.

As a result

, the

government

budget

allocated to

treatments

can be reduced. To summarize. believe that

countries

should spend equally on

treatments

as well as

prevention

methods.