This
is a well-known fact that prisons are becoming overcrowded
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. In
this
essay, I shall be discussing whether jails are key to
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crime
rate or
communityCorrect word choice
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service
help in
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of
criminals
.
Firstly
, captivating culprits help
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law and order in society, leading to better control of
crime
rates by the Government.
Also
, it has been observed that in some cases, when the
criminals
are released, they are involved in
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.
Furthermore
, serious offenders
such
as murderers and rapists are
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and their isolation is required.
On the other hand
,
community
service
is likely to be more successful for people who are involved in
crime
for the
first
time or are juveniles. If
such
persons are imprisoned, it would provide
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dangerous felons. Absorbing petty
criminals
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community
service
will give them
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of belonging and may deter them to become
criminals
.
For instance
, my cousin got into bad company and was involved in petty
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. Once he was caught and the court compelled him
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community
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teaching slum children in night school. It was a
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lesson for him, which made him
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person.
Also
, staying with his family may have resulted in
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outcome.
In a nutshell, authorities can punish lawbreakers in many different ways including prison sentences and
community
service
,
however
, I believe it should be regard to their
crime
and
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of their danger to society.