The number of people being sent to prison is increasing year by year. While some people believe prison is the best way to tackle crime, others suggest that community service is more successful. Discuss both the things and give your opinion

This

is a well-known fact that prisons are becoming overcrowded

now a days

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. In

this

essay, I shall be discussing whether jails are key to

low

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a low

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crime

rate or

community

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whether community

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service

help in

improvement

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the improvement

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of

criminals

.

Firstly

, captivating culprits help

maintaining

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law and order in society, leading to better control of

crime

rates by the Government.

Also

, it has been observed that in some cases, when the

criminals

are released, they are involved in

another crimes

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another crime

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.

Furthermore

, serious offenders

such

as murderers and rapists are

grave

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a grave

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threat to

community

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the community

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and their isolation is required.

On the other hand

,

community

service

is likely to be more successful for people who are involved in

crime

for the

first

time or are juveniles. If

such

persons are imprisoned, it would provide

them

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the

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opportunity

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the opportunity

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of

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to

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acquaintance

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with

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themselves with

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dangerous felons. Absorbing petty

criminals

into

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in

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community

service

will give them

sense

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a sense

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of belonging and may deter them to become

criminals

.

For instance

, my cousin got into bad company and was involved in petty

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shoplifting

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shop lifting

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shoplifting

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. Once he was caught and the court compelled him

with

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to

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community

service

of

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by

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teaching slum children in night school. It was a

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life-changing

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life changing

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life-changing

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lesson for him, which made him

better

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a better

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person.

Also

, staying with his family may have resulted in

better

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outcome. In a nutshell, authorities can punish lawbreakers in many different ways including prison sentences and

community

service

,

however

, I believe it should be regard to their

crime

and

scale

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the scale

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of their danger to society.