Crime appears to be rising in the most counties in the world, especially among people. Identify the possible causes of this trend and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
The concern of increasing offence in the world
exceptionally
in midst of Olde scent become serious. The causes of Replace the word
except
this
appear to be focused on two cases and Linking Words
number
of solutions Change the article
a number
the number
also
to be possible.
Perhaps the significant factor is poverty and financial crisis in many countries provoke increasing Linking Words
of
Change preposition
in
Add an article
a felony
felony
. It means that poor Fix the agreement mistake
felonies
people
may commit Use synonyms
Add an article
a crime
crime
to earn money. Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
For example
, indigents might steal something like food or money from stores. Another origin can be family disputes that stimulate Linking Words
to
vice. Change preposition
apply
In other words
, if parents did not realize Linking Words
Correct pronoun usage
their offsprings’
offsprings’
needs, They will Change noun form
offspring’s
be
Correct your spelling
befriend
friend
with indecent guys. Fix the agreement mistake
friends
For instance
, when young Linking Words
people
join Use synonyms
to
lawbreaker groups, they will commit misdeeds to get their encouragement.
Turning to possible solutions, an obvious step would be for governments to support jobless Change preposition
apply
people
and help them to find Use synonyms
Add an article
a job
job
. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
Therefore
, they will be able to handle their financial problem. Linking Words
For example
, if the governments help jobless Linking Words
people
, they will not aspire to Use synonyms
stealing
. A Change the verb form
steal
second
remedy might be for families to have Linking Words
friendly
coact with their children. SO, parents can participate Correct article usage
a friendly
parenting
classes to learn how they should raise their children. Change preposition
in parenting
For instance
, when parents have apt Linking Words
behavior
with offspring, they will encourage Change the spelling
behaviour
to
do admirable deeds.
In summary, the factors of misery and family problems appear to be the main Correct pronoun usage
them to
cases
. Support Correct your spelling
causes
of
the poor and paying attention to family problems may be suitable remedies.Change preposition
for
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