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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The supplied blueprint gives information about the SOUTHWEST AIRPORT renovation and development project for the upcoming year. Overall, the airport's blueprint plan has undertaken numerous developments, for ,instance ATM machine, Sky train, Car hire and
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 more and more gates,
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 an extra entrance and exit is provided. The arrivals on the right-hand side, a car hire at the corner and above that new atm machine and cafeteria, though customs remain unchanged. We can
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 see the number of gates added to the arrivals and departures. Coming to the departures,
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the left corner cafe is been shifted from
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 corner from the top and
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 counter is shifted opposite, where
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 bag drop is added. Shops are constructed above the security, as it remains stagnant. ,
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 walkway is replaced by a Sky train, which is situated right middle of the gate passage dividing the departure and arrival gates.
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