At present, the media affects people’s life significantly. What impact does this have on the society? Is it a positive or a negative development?

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people's life is much more than we think and speak

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Electronic, Print and Social platforms are having

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strong impact on

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society. Television news channels

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people significantly. In

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I would like to potrate some of the key developments that are taking

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in all the above platforms mentioned. The impact of the media on

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society is that most of the channels especially in

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have their own political agenda with respect to the Political Party in power.

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their articles in

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attractive and

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interesting

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manner to increase their circulation. Nowadays every political

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party

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has its own social platform to express

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views on the latest developments in the country and the decisions taken by the Government from time to time. It has a negative development on

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society as the people are getting influenced by the news on the

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television

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in Rajasthan a Northern State in India where a tailor was brutally murdered at his

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a political leader from the ruling party has made some controversial comments on prophet Mohamad which had hurt the feelings of the

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in the country and some

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activists have

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who supports

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would like to share some of the ideas that would

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worse.

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