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Limited money should be spent on computer equipments or good teachers. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

#money #computer #equipments #teachers
With the agreeable order of the day, it can be denied that there is a rapid growth in
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 of technological devices. In my perspective, budgeting
that is
 done by
school
 management should pay more attention to providing advanced
computer
equipments
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equipment
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 for
students
.
Computer
equipments
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 are important for
students
 especially
at
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 early childhood to familiarize them with technology. Technology enables
students
 to explore technological features
such
 as using computers to work on their
school
 works or home
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. A good education system includes
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good technology use at
schools
. With that being said, money should be spent more on purchasing the best
computer
equipments
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 at
school
 and the budget should not be limited whatsoever.
This
 is because nowadays, good
computer
equipments
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 are quite expensive especially if
schools
 want to purchase a lot of
computer
 units at once regarding the number of
students
. On the other side, some people might think that money should be spent more on giving
teachers
 more reasonable wages. The reason behind it is that
teachers
 deserve to be paid more for teaching
students
 and designing
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 curriculum plans for them.
However
, I have to disagree with the statement. The budget for
teachers
' wages has already been included in the
school
's financial plan and
this
 number might not increase drastically in the near future.
This
 is because rapid technological growth will overtake the
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 of
teachers
 in
schools
. In conclusion, I think that
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amount
amout
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amount
 of money should be spent on
teachers
 in
schools
 rather
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 good
computer
equipments
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 because
schools
 should try to provide the best technological devices to
students
.
This
 is to make them familiarized with the technological advancement we are currently facing today and in the future.
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