You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter -Explain why you have moved -Describe the new apartment -Invite him or her to pay a visit

#house #friend #-explain #-describe #apartment #-invite #visit

Dear Sara, I hope you and your family are well. I never forget the tremendous hospitality you extended to me

last

month when I visited the city where you live. Anyway, the reason I am writing is that you are informed that I altered my flat. As you know, I am a freelancer;

consequently

, I occupy at home. My profession entailed far more consideration.

Therefore

, my environment around me should be entirely quiet. Since the prior neighbourhood was so congested and noisy, I rented a novel apartment in the calm district. My new flat is so much spectacular with a stunning court.

Furthermore

, it has a prospect of the ocean. As it has located on the fifth floor, I frequently witness sun dusk. Not only is there an immense shopping mall nearby but there

also

is a professional sports complex- the Energy Chain Gyms.

Moreover

, it surrounds me with the international restaurants being upmarket. I would be thrilled if you accept my invitation to meet each other at my new flat

Saturday at 6:00 pm. the address is 50th Floor, No 25, Washington Alley. Perhaps it would be better to get a taxi due to my location does not have appropriate access to the subway. I look forward to seeing you as soon as possible Best regards, Sania

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