Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant areas of city and towns, while others say housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?
It is said that planting accommodation for low-income workers, and even immediate ones still don't have an estate in some huge cities
trees
is an important activity for our habitat. Therefore
, numerous humans agree that trees
should be planted in the vacant areas
of cities and towns, while others say housing amenities should be built alternatively. In my experience, I prefer planting trees
because of some pros and cons.
First
, Building housing amenities will increase living areas
and help residents' lives to become more convenient. Our country still lacksAdd an article
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such
as Ho Chi Minh, Ha Noi, or Da Nang. In 2021, Ho Chi Minh city, which is named after my country's first
President, had over 13 billion residents. Not only half of its residents had private accommodation, but the city also
lacks educational and medical facilities.
On the other hand
, planting trees
will help to increase the quality of the atmosphere, protect the environment, and regulate the weather. In recent years, although
the national and international governments add many laws to protect our planet, there was an upward trend in the deforestation issue. Because of the benefits of forests such
as lumber, and land for agriculture, numerous humans try to break the law and damage the forest. To protect our planet, preventing deforestation is not enough, so planting tree in many areas
is another way.
In conclusion, despite many pros of building housing amenities, we should plant more trees
in the vacant areas
of cities and towns because the most important target of our generation is to protect our planet.Submitted by ntlanh92 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite