Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what the problem is Suggest solutions to the problem

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Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Artem I am writing to you in order to express my concerns regarding the renovation

that is

currently happening on St. Lauren Street. The repairing of the street spoils my life, I would like to find a way to solve it. Basically, there are a couple of issues here.

First

, the workers do not take a break at the weekend. During the working

days

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I am at the office and I do not have any complaints, but I am not able to have a good rest because of the noise on Saturday and Sunday.

Second

, sometimes the roaring of construction machines is unbearable. I suppose they are quite old and

that is

why their sound is so ear-splitting. Taking all of these into account, my suggestions are to stop any work at the weekend and to repair or change the machines that are being used on my street. These two measures would make my life a bit easier. Please let me know if my proposals can be implemented. Best regards, Artem.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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