Many countries spend a lot of money on art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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in most countries buy a painting with a lot of

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are in favour of it on the other thinks,Spending

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on health and studies is more important than buying a craft.Physical health and Studies are considerably good for our generation than buying a valuable painting.

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of all,

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are focused on Culture and Heritage by buying valuable arts.They feel

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it is a way to preserve our history.So they will store it in the art gallery to showcase country beauty to the

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Generation.

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,One of my friends bought an Art of a woman carrying a pot on her head in the desert.Through

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,we will understand from the visualisation,How culture was grown and carried forward with the same standard.The Paint was worth 500 Dollars.There are peoples in society who gives importance to preserving our culture in the form of Craft. On the other side, Few Peoples in the communities are interested in spending

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on Physical Health as well as education.They feel ,there will be social benefits from investing in it.

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,We do sponsorship children in education.After completion of studies,They will be a responsible person in

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society

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to it they will educate the

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around them.So Spending

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will reward our entire community.Due to

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,there are few

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do support

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. In conclusion,As a citizen of the country,It is our responsibility to spend the hard-earned

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for the development of

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community.So I prefer to invest in something that will improve society as well as be good for the country rather than buying art .

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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264 words

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