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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward whole others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Some individuals are in the support of the
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 rate of
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 in paper books and see is as
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growth while others are against it.
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the trends. One of the
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 of
e-books
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people
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 whenever the need comes. The high rate of technology in our society today
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 made
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 accessible and affordable to everyone. Virtually everybody
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access
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smart phones
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 which are very handy to carry about and easy to operate.
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 where
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they
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 can browse and get any
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 they want.
For example
,
e-books
 as a massive impact on the educational system.
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 find it easier to do their assignment without the help of
people
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the
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 have enough
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 what they want
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e-books
 which they can read on.
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e-book
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 made work easy for researchers to get enough
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 and references. Looking at the demerit,some individual believe that
e-books
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 encourage reading. The fact that
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information
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increase
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 laziness towards reading and procrastination among
people
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 the young ones. For
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,
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are always reluctant to visit the Library to read when they are aware that they can
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they
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 shuffle the internet.
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 have a nonchalant
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towards
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 reading even when they decide to read with
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, their mind
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 distracted and they use the gadget for another thing at the time they
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 to read. In conclusion,
although
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a result of the accessibility and affordability of soft copy books which is a great invention
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some
people
 are not happy with the development.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Portability
  • Accessibility
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Environmental conservation
  • Tactile experience
  • Aesthetic appeal
  • Digital fatigue
  • Prolonged screen time
  • Technical issues
  • Independent bookstores
  • Piracy issues
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