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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view point ?

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Arts are an integral part of human civilization. Art reflects the culture and heritage of many
region
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.
This
 particular skill has a very long and great history in showcasing its importance to society. Any historical place around the globe can easily be identified by its rich handwork. In
this
 connection, some sectors of people think that the government is spending more money on these arts rather than using the fund for other specific purposes. The rulers in the democratic era are very much concerned with preserving the skills for future generations to come and helping them to know the importance of skills. But in some developed ,land the public is contradicting the decisions made by the local authorities in spending huge amounts on these programs.
Secondly
, they say that amount may be spent on providing better amenities to the public in order to achieve uniform growth in all sectors of the society.
Further
 to some extent, I agree with
this
 opinion that most nations around the world are investing a large proportion of their financial resources in
this
 particular field to protect their treasure for the ages to come. Recent studies have proven that developed societies are spending nearly 15% of their annual budget in
this
 field.
This
 percentage of investment can provide civic amenities to the poor state in Asia and Africa. ,
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Finally
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 most developed people can come up with
such
 an idea that would uplift the face of the poor public in the years to come.
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