We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?

Nowadays,
computers
are getting much more popular, so
that
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people
can not live without them. It can be thought that adults are using
computers
more than children, but it is not the truth.
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Unfortunately
Unfortunatly
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Unfortunately
,
people
are getting addicted to technology and it is not as good.
Firstly
, using
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the computer
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computer
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a lot affects
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teenagers
teenegars
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teenagers
and children in a bad way, because when they need
an information
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they can get it from
internet
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quickly rather than using their
mind
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. Due to not using their mind, they can not be creative.
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that, it has
also
effect
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an effect
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to
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people
's social life.
For example
, if someone
addicted
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to
computer
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, it is hard to have friends. Researchers say that
,
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these kinds of
people
can not communicate with other
people
easily.
Therefore
, they do not have a social life.
In addition
, the internet and social media
is
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getting dangerous place because
of
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technology is developing.
People
have to carry out how much time they spend on
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computer
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computers
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. Especially, parents should delimit to
computers
, so that children can not search
everything
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they want.
Computers
are not always dangerous or bad to
use
. It has
also
beneficial
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part, but
people
have to know how to
use
it. In conclusion, if
people
use
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for beneficial
informations
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it is good to
use
. But, it has to be limited because not to get addicted.
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