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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

#people #children #home #child #development #school #methods
In
this
 present world education is
such
 an important aspect
in
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 children for their mental and social development. Even with
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excellence
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 learning, the results for its future would be successful. For
this
 reason, there are two excellent methodologies of teaching.
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, at
school
 and at home that
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leave
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 opportunities for having deeper social relations, as well as more concentration.
Firstly
, at
school
, students have the opportunity to make close friends.
This
 helps them with motivation and support.
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, when a kid explains what he learned to another kid, the other child would understand
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better the subject because they have the same age so they are more confident to ask.
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this
 aspect, going to
classroom
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 with your supporter friends would be always a better choice.
Secondly
, at home, students have more time for them lonely so their attention to classes is better than at
school
.
Thus
, when children are with other kids, they prefer to play and
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do different activities, while at their house they pay more attention to their personal learning.
This
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happen
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 because they are more controlled.
Therefore
, receiving classes personally would be excellent for kids who are distracted easily. In summary, receiving help from classmates gives a motivational experience for learning difficult themes at
school
.
In addition
, studying at home would be stricter. After
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 analysis
on
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this
 subject, it is recommended for children
study
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 at
school
 if they like to create social relations.
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as
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 a motivation for study.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Tailored learning
  • peer pressure
  • flexibility
  • instill values
  • socialization
  • communication skills
  • specialized facilities
  • extracurricular activities
  • diversity
  • structured environment
  • customized education
  • well-rounded education
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