There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my concern regarding the
bus
availability in the suburban
area
at Eglinton.
Firstly
,
bus
service is one of the crucial commute methods to reach the city
area
.Most people are working in the private sector
that is
located in the centre of the city
area
which is far from my current residence.
Although
buses are available in the daytime,the
bus
operator misses the scheduled
time
.The
bus
availability and frequency of the
bus
are two major problems with the current
bus
schedule.
Furthermore
,the school children are depends on
this
bus
timing as it affects their travel
time
to reach their school on
time
.The frequency of the
bus
has significantly impacted the employees who fully depend on common
bus
transport. It would be great to arrange an additional
bus
service to my
area
and instruct the
bus
operator to operate a
bus
on
time
. I look forward to an affirmative response.Thank you. Yours sincerely,
Sundararaja
Correct your spelling
Sundararajan
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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