There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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letter to express my concern regarding the
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availability in the suburban
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at Eglinton.
Firstly
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,
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service is one of the crucial commute methods to reach the city
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.Most people are working in the private sector
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located in the centre of the city
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which is far from my current residence.
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buses are available in the daytime,the
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operator misses the scheduled
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.The
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availability and frequency of the
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are two major problems with the current
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schedule.
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,the school children are depends on
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bus
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timing as it affects their travel
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to reach their school on
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.The frequency of the
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has significantly impacted the employees who fully depend on common
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transport. It would be great to arrange an additional
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service to my
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and instruct the
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operator to operate a
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on
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. I look forward to an affirmative response.Thank you. Yours sincerely,
Sundararaja
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Sundararajan
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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