When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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a well-discussed topic, and it seems,
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deliberate use of the building is more imperative than its outside features.
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more principal due to some facts.
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, those
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earthquake happen and architectures improve
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ability to build strong constructions.
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quality of materials for
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appearance.
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, the price of
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been made.
In addition
, It is advisable for citizens to choose their choice based on strong materials.
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can be seen as Iranians, they would focus on outwards and other elements have no means for them. But in my eyes,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • functionality
  • user experience
  • ergonomic
  • productivity
  • safety standards
  • building codes
  • emergency exits
  • ventilation
  • accessibility features
  • sustainability
  • energy-efficient
  • flexibility
  • adaptability
  • multifunctional
  • regulations
  • operational costs
  • environmental impact
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