You are interested in studying a short course at a college in an English speaking country. Write a letter to the college. In your letter you should say: which course you are interested in and why? describe your educational background and work experience? and say why you would like to study at that college.?

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is Amama Zubair writing to you to share my interest in one of your summer courses, as your institution is offering many training courses for the

beginers

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beginners

who want to earn some extra money, despite

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being

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not relevant to their previous degree.

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, I am keen to learn the digital marketing course at your college as that would help

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earn through freelancing online without affecting my chemistry career, as

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have some free hours in the evening.

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, let me give you some information about my educational background,

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hold a

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degree in chemistry and

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working as

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4 years. I know my choice of beginners course is not relevant to my background but

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love to enjoy different lines of work. I

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think studying and getting along with the stream of study will be difficult for me as

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have advanced level

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language certification, and have some knowledge about the course, gathered via

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. I hope to get a

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positive

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response from your side. Regards,

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

177 words

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