You are interested in studying a short course at a college in an English speaking country. Write a letter to the college. In your letter you should say: which course you are interested in and why? describe your educational background and work experience? and say why you would like to study at that college.?

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Hi,

This

is Amama Zubair writing to you to share my interest in one of your summer courses, as your institution is offering many training courses for the

beginers

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beginners

who want to earn some extra money, despite

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being

them

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not relevant to their previous degree.

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, I am keen to learn the digital marketing course at your college as that would help

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earn through freelancing online without affecting my chemistry career, as

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have some free hours in the evening.

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, let me give you some information about my educational background,

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hold a

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degree in chemistry and

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working as

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for

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4 years. I know my choice of beginners course is not relevant to my background but

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love to enjoy different lines of work. I

dont

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don't

think studying and getting along with the stream of study will be difficult for me as

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have advanced level

english

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language certification, and have some knowledge about the course, gathered via

internet

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. I hope to get a

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positive

postive

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response from your side. Regards,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

177 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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