Discussion essay: Some people think that student's study more efficiently in groups, others argues that studying separately is better. Discuss the advantages of both ways and give your opinion.

Most people have studied in their lives, some more than others and everyone has
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the way he or she studies. There are many different techniques which
students
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such
as writing a summary or
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a lot of practice questions.
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some
students
think that studying in
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groups
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efficient
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efficient
and others think that studying alone is better. In
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I will discuss, which way of studying is better and why.
First
of
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it depends on the situation. When you need to learn facts,
such
as learning words from
another languages
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or get to know formulas from math or
phyisics
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physics
. If
this
is the case it is better to study alone
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because
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is no one who can help you remember those words or formulas, you need to do it
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your own. Some
students
like
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in a group because it will help them stay focused and motivated. But what I experienced in High School is that it was easy for me to get distracted, when I was studying with friends.
On the other hand
, studying in a group
also
has its benefits. For
me
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this
was especially the case when I was writing a report. Your fellow
students
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can help you
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to start writing the report and give you tips.
In addition
to
this
, you can discuss with each other and
this
will give you an insight on how other
stundents
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students
handled the same problem. To conclude, for me studying alone is better
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because I am way more focused and
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you have the internet where you can find the answers to most of your questions.
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