In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
Nowadays, difficult cultures teach a variety of techniques to
children
to make them become achievers. Few say it can be successful through hard work
. This
essay will suggest that academically and athletically is the biggest advantage of this
and a physical and mental disorder is the primary disadvantage.
Education and Sports
are most vital for children
. On one hand, try hard work
enough in school they can become class toppers most of the time. For instance
, If they obtained strong reading or writing skills by doing appropriate work
they can easily deliver attractive essays with a high level of vocabulary. furthermore
, Children
's reading habits make them obtain the highest score by giving correct answers. Similarly
, Sports
participation is prominent in schooling. Moreover
, Doing more workouts, timely exercises, and more practices in specific sports
athletes lead them forward through gold medalists or obtaining first
place in the sports
.
Despite these advantages, many children
often get mental disorders and physical disorders when they practice and do more hard work
. This
encourages to development of complexity among other children
. In addition
, sometimes these losses end up in disappointment. For example
, In a sports
event if a player just obtained 3rd place, but this
achievement (3rd place) will not give them motivation or encouragement, instead
they will always imagine themselves as a loser and disappointed most of the time.
in conclusion, more hard work
improve to become an achiever, however
, doing more hard work
sometimes created mental disorder and physical disorder. Therefore
children
should avoid doing more exercises or hard work
for aiming to become a batch topper or gold medalist.Submitted by sutharshinirenganathan on
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