You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter •explain why you think you would be suitable for the job •say what else you could do for the family •give your reasons for wanting the job
#advertisement #couple #australia #someone #two #children #language #year #•explain #job #•say #•give
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you in regard to the advertisement that was published on one of the online job portals recently.
Firstly
, let me brief you on my personal experience in teaching my language. Although
I am a mathematics teacher by profession, my major at university was in Sinhala language, which is the language of my mother tongue. I have been teaching Sinhala for many years, and cater to both students who are local as well as
foreign, also
have proven to be an effective tutor for pupils to achieve high grades on their exams.
Moreover
, as I mentioned earlier, mathematics is what I currently teach at school, and I have obtained the necessary training. If there is a requirement for teaching this
topic, I would be happy to provide my services.
Additionally
, I would also
like to note that, this
specific advert caught my attention immediately since I am very keen on teaching overseas students, where one reason being as I am in the process of applying for teaching jobs in Australia, such
work as this
would help in that process. Furthermore
, I believe teaching students who are from a different country also
benefits me in one way, as I would obtain the chance to learn their culture in the process.
Thus
, I hope you will take my application into consideration when choosing the teacher for your children, and look forward to a positive reply.
Yours sincerely,
James BluntSubmitted by kanishka.wimalasuriya on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to maintain clarity and cohesion. Your letter well demonstrates this approach, but refining the focus could enhance the overall effectiveness.
task achievement
For a higher score, consider expanding on how your specific skills and experience with the Sinhala language and culture could benefit the children uniquely, thereby strengthening the task response further.
greeting and closing
Your introduction and closing statements follow a polite and professional tone, setting a positive tone for the letter.
task achievement
You clearly articulated your teaching experience and interest in the job, effectively responding to the task's requirements.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
